The video analysis I have uploaded are first thoughts of a class mate that I showed my work to for the first time. I asked them beforehand to give me their honest opinion on what they thought, this way the feedback I receive I would be able to then use that feedback to better my work. The main improvements I have taken notice of is that of my front cover. I understand that for a first draft it is heading in the right direction, however in order to improve it I need to add more detail to the front cover. The more things to attract the target audience will increase the likely hood of the customer buying it. The positive feedback that I received was mainly on the background photos and the main layout of the text.
